Homework Feedback

I feel as if assignment 2 for English 250 feedback was very negative. I understand that my summary was not exactly the professional level that Victor Santos is seeking yet I feel as if I have only seen things that went wrong in my paper and others in the classes paper. I guess I'm not at all the level of writing that I thought that I was. It's a complete disappointment and I got the assumption that everything that I did in my paper was a weakness, and I believe that now than ever I have no strengths when writing a paper.


I wish I had my old english professor so she could at least give me positive and constructive criticism so that I'm not afraid to ask questions and I'm not cut to the core saying my entire paper is a fail. As much as we are told that our paper was a disappointment the feedback seemed to meet the same level of that expectation. 

Impressions of Class

So Far I have truly enjoyed the English 250 cross cultural class. I have enjoyed the bases of the class and the book "Aims of Arguments". English 250 has been able to keep my interest a lot better than many of my other english classes I have had to take in my educational career. The free spirited feeling that is brought into this class really lets me to express my opinions, if the class was serious based I feel as if I would not freely express myself. My absolute favorite part of the class is all the diversity!! I have never had a class ever have so many different cultural backgrounds and I absolutely LOVE it! I am so excited to see how the rest of the semester unfolds. 

Marilyn Monroe

“I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when they're right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.”

Blog Exercise One

So You Think You Can Dance

Season 8

"Total Eclipse of The Heart"

This Piece is created by Mandy Moore one of my favorite choreographers. After taking many classes from her over many summers it was extremely fun watching her create pieces on this hit TV show on Fox.

All About Me

Fun facts about me:

-I love dance, anyway to express yourself! 

-I LOVE my lord Jesus. My God is so good.

-I could eat ice cream for every meal....  I love coldstone creamy! 

-I have danced with the dallas cowboy cheerleaders twice with my best friend Sara.

-Taylor Swift asked me to dinner, and we talked over cheese pizza!

-My favorite color is black, it's so classy and sophisticated!

-Spending time working at a funeral home I have found many true reasons to live my life fully.

-I'm a total momma's girl.

-I believe in love at first sight.

-My favorite bible verse is Proverbs 3: 5-6

-Marilyn Monroe is so beautiful...

-Beauty is in the eye of the beholder is one of my favorite quotes

-The beach is my favorite place to be.

-I'm a Psychology major

-I love to love!